PD FFS
- Jarlath Busby
- May 16
- 1 min read
PD FFS
Ironic, this constant ache,
which it seems I cannot shake;
From the moment that I wake,
tremors like a man on Jake,
time measured by pills I neck;
Pleasures granted I used to take,
fail to rise, a half-baked cake,
drools, slitters, again I check;
Drawn a dud in life’s sweepstake,
missed the ladder, down the snake,
called tails not heads, a mistake.
someone’s standing on the brake;
News of cures are always fake,
hope now a vanishing lake,
plans and dreams I now forsake.
Masterful internal rhyme, it felt like I was following a paper-chase of your thoughts, good stuff, for sure!
I wish the thing would take a break
but I do like the rhymes you make
so keep the dreaming going, mate
lots of nice touches in this one, like the word play and board games references
Nice work…… never give up, try and stay strong and keep writing .
You are not defined by PD you are still you . I. Shake therefore I am…keep up the good work and keep dreaming big 👍👍