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Living the dream

Happy in my dream, my health exudes

With youth and long forgotten vigour

Where Parkinsons cannot intrude

In this place he does not figure


But there I cannot long remain

As the dawn invades my space

inevitably I must try again

To put a smile on this blank face


Take that first unstable stride

Again those words ' You're looking good '

No , it's just that I can hide

And surely would do if I could


I know it shouldn't be a re-write and ,I admit, it could be argued as such. However the challenge inspired me to write this, so that's my excuse :-)



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Nigel Smith
Nigel Smith
May 11, 2024

Keith , Bravo, it is always, always best to go with what you 'feel' and I'm very pleased that you did, it's not really a re write anyway. I'll post my original at the end of the month.and explain what inspired me.


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Keith Trayling
Keith Trayling
May 11, 2024
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I look forward to that Nigel,ans seeing the different interpretations of a piece. I appreciate your encouragement

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Keith Trayling
Keith Trayling
May 10, 2024

Thanks Martin, it's inspiring as well when you receive positive comments

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John Wood
John Wood
May 10, 2024

There should be a whole anthology on Parkinson's dreams! Thought provoking - good job.

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Keith Trayling
Keith Trayling
May 10, 2024
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Or Nightmares!!

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Jarlath Busby
Jarlath Busby
May 10, 2024

Waking with Parkinsons is like Groundhog Day so its inevitable that some themes are going to be recurrent. Enjoyed this.

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Keith Trayling
Keith Trayling
May 10, 2024
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Thanks Jarlath. Its a real lift when your peers say they enjoy your work

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Alice Carroll
Alice Carroll
May 09, 2024

Well said. You expressed my thoughts better than I could have.

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Keith Trayling
Keith Trayling
May 10, 2024
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Thank you Alice

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