Earthshine
The new moon holds the old moon tight.
Her dying partner glows with faint earthshine,
as by the lake the evening deepens, sucking up the light.
The old moon has not long now, just one night,
to whirl her final turn above the far skyline.
The new moon holds the old moon tight.
Across the darkening waters, gulls in flight
head down towards the sea, a slender line
that disappears as evening deepens, sucking up the light.
There was a younger moment when we might
have grasped the stars and twisted them to our design.
The new moon holds the old moon tight.
But in this instant we are timeless, blazing, bright,
As if intoxicated by the fumes of new-pressed wine
We drink as evening deepens, sucking up the light.
How can we know which choice is wrong or right?
Which star to wish on? There is no clear sign.
The new moon holds the old moon tight
as by the lake the evening deepens, sucking up the light.
AJS
Thank you, everyone. Much appreciated!
Great work Alistair. Really enjoyed this. Richly evocative of gazing at the sky with a glass of vino.
Excellent in form and content; a wonderful villanelle...
A lovely poem Alistair