Still Life
- Jarlath Busby
- Apr 6, 2024
- 1 min read
Still Life
In solemn hues
Greys and blues
Single empty chair
The bottles downed
Sorrows drowned
Aura of despair
A broken heart
Souls apart
Shroud of leaden sky
Through glass and grime
Marking time
As the world goes by
You create a scene a story and a mood which perfectly match the picture. I love the lines'aura of despair' and 'through glass and grime'
Wonderfully written. Love the title. Helped writer's block. Still not going to submit the challenge this month.
Stripped down and stark but so full of meaning
Beautifully written
Perfect flow
Captures the moment
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