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Still Life


Still Life

 

In solemn hues

Greys and blues

Single empty chair

The bottles downed

Sorrows drowned

Aura of despair

 

A broken heart

Souls apart

Shroud of leaden sky

Through glass and grime

Marking time

As the world goes by

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Jim Read
Jim Read
4月22日

You create a scene a story and a mood which perfectly match the picture. I love the lines'aura of despair' and 'through glass and grime'

いいね!

Alice Carroll
Alice Carroll
4月18日

Wonderfully written. Love the title. Helped writer's block. Still not going to submit the challenge this month.

いいね!
Jarlath Busby
Jarlath Busby
4月18日
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Thanks for your kind comment. Have a go- I always enjoy reading your work.

いいね!

Martin Pickard
Martin Pickard
4月15日

Stripped down and stark but so full of meaning

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Beautifully written

Perfect flow

Captures the moment

,,.,.,

いいね!
Jarlath Busby
Jarlath Busby
4月07日
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Thanks Graham

いいね!
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