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Pondering words


If you write a word

in the middle

of a piece of paper

and just leave it there.


All by itself.


A word like, ‘it’ for example.


Left all alone on a page.


With no other words

to butt up against.


After a while ‘it’ loses all meaning.

‘It’ becomes something else.


Colour. Shape. Form.


But then, there are other words.


Words like,


‘if,’


‘when,’


‘how’


Those words.

Those words when left all alone in the middle of a page.

Still hold such promise.



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Darrell Troon
Darrell Troon
04 avr. 2023

A thought provoking piece, I know how “it” feels .

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Stephen Kingsnorth
Stephen Kingsnorth
29 mars 2023

I'm soon to post my own reflection, having plagiarised your idea. As Jim says, you may have started something. Of course, I like word play, which often gets the better of me (noise/Noyes!), but I think the collective sparks are better when they fly...

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Jim Read
Jim Read
29 mars 2023

I was intrigued when you read this one. Having stared at it on screen, for me your poem is a sort of lesson in the role of words in sentences. 'It' is so versatle it gives no clues whereas the other words suggest a question or the begining of a sentence. You may have started 'A Poet's Guide to English Grammar.' Well that's what I got out of it!

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Alison Blevins
Alison Blevins
29 mars 2023
En réponse à

Hank you Jim. I find that very amusing as grammar is often what I struggle with when writing poetry.

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