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Parkinson's River

Updated: May 16

I feel so helpless,

out of control

and not because of brain cells you stole.

Its dreams and futures that can never to be -

this is what you’ve taken from me.

All sold down Parkinson’s river.

 

I’m all tied up,

its all confusion,

a giant optical illusion.

I don’t know what’s real or what is false.

I want to steer a change of course,

away from Parkinson’s river.

 

But I am stuck,

I have no choice.

You’re even taking my f****g voice.

I want to scream, shout, be heard,

Its all so crazy and absurd,

sailing on Parkinson’s river.

 

So what to do?

I cannot leave.

I’m stuck with it

in desperate need -

of a life raft - I’ll call her hope,

and pray that she will stay afloat

while on Parkinson’s river.

 

7件のコメント


markcrump2010
markcrump2010
4月04日

this is very good work., I can relate to this. Frustrating and unfair but you still have a voice here ,a strong and loud voice with plenty to say…so, keep up with the good work and I know it’s not easy but try and be positive ,it really does make a difference

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Alison Blevins
Alison Blevins
4月08日
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Thank you Mark.

いいね!

Keith Trayling
Keith Trayling
4月03日

Yep true and the frustration eminates through the piece. We are all in the same boat which maked this group so valuable

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Alice Carroll
Alice Carroll
4月01日

Alison: I feel your pain. You manage to write and share poems that have a different take from many of us. Keep on sharing.

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Alison Blevins
Alison Blevins
4月01日
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Thank you Alice - I appreciate this.

いいね!

Nigel Smith
Nigel Smith
3月28日

Poetry - Yes! I can feel the emotion, frustration, anger perfect length, rolls along with polite rage.

PD - I've long noted. ( when I could trust my thoughts haha) that we are all very susceptible to all manner of non-motor ills through the winter, and peaks about now. They will ease soon.

いいね!
Alison Blevins
Alison Blevins
4月01日
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thanks Nige.

いいね!
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