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In The Shadows

Updated: Sep 29

In the all-night cafe off Union Street,

Where sweatshops, offices, and flats compete,

There’s a shadow world below the city’s beat,

A place to gather, where the night folk meet.

When the day is done and your shift’s complete,

Or an early brew, dark, and hot, and sweet,

On the way to work through the winter sleet,

You cup your hands and stamp your feet.

In the steamy sauna of the café’s heat

With a clientele of a select elite:

Porters and posties in the window seat,

Binmen, busmen, and a bloke from Crete,

Who drinks his Irish coffee neat,

calling “Bon appétit!” with a drunken bleat,

To the Kurdish cleaners in quick retreat

A cop in the corner, too indiscreet,

As familiar faces from the custody suite

Swap the same old stories over eggs and meat.

It’s a grim existence, neither trick nor treat,

But these weary workers won’t concede defeat.

They’ll never be an asset on the balance sheet,

But they roll the wheel that never completes.

And follow their friends to the midnight feast,

In the all-night cafe off Union Street.

6 Comments


Excellent Martin, rolls along entertaining all the way.

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A captivating scene painted which brought to mind the Furey’s Red Rose Cafe.

they come from the farms and the factories too

and they all soon forget who they are

the cares of today are soon washed away as they sit at a stool by a bar”

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Very effective with the rhyming style and finding all ( well 99% ) of those endings making sense. I'm jealous 😃

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Just brilliant! And fulfilling the brief of the challenge...

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Great poem lovely rhythm

Bloke from Crete made me laugh, and never an asset on the balance sheet so true

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Thanks Paul. I think it still needs some work. The bloke from Crete was almost a balding parakeet! All companies say their people are their "greatest asset" but only Premiership football clubs value their talent enough to put them on the balance sheet!

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