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Hello / Goodbye

Stay a minute old friend,

Let’s sit and ear’s bend.

Like times we used to laugh,

Before this Parkinson’s path.

~

Now eyes like windows reveal,

Awkwardness you now feel.

Shifting foot to foot you stand,

Like in possession of contraband.


The atmosphere both sense,

In resounding sound of silence

A glance down and away,

Say’s all there is to say.

~

Symptoms commanding vision,

Escape your solitary mission.

Struggle with what you see,

A reflection of society.

~

Separate ways we now go,

But would like you to know

No matter what condition causes,

I ‘m more than shakes and pauses.


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Nigel Smith
Nigel Smith
Sep 02

Eh-yup ar kid!

A soft wash of a poem, that you realise later, has quietly left its mark, I like that! Did I read you're from Cross Green, Johnny? When I met and wooed my wife she was living at East End Park, though she's originally from Caldwell Road, Crossgates.hopefully we'll meet sometime at the Open mic.

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Hi Nigel, Cross Green was the High School I attended, a few minutes walk from East End Park and Know Cross Gates. Will visit the open mic event

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Poignant, I think we have all felt that way at some point. Nicely done.

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That closing line stays with you—strong way to end

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