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Fingers, Thumbs, Palms

Yes, palm and fingers do recall

those hands that raised me, walking tall,

my palm wrapped round his pinkie hook.


Their tips traced round my garden palms

then stepped and skipped, bowl underarm,

to tickle, after pregnant pause.


That cradle on from steeple formed,

for I was knit, my mother’s womb,

then dandled, upstairs, downstairs too.


My siblings, I, played with cat’s wool,

our scenes changed as played on the nail,

becoming tipsters, knuckle dust.


Both parents in my fingers, thumbs

as rooted, spreading from my palms,

though they now parted from their form.


So from their hands I grew apart,

she once palm olive, he napalm -

in fashion and Nam soldier rôles.


Though both imprinted, born, beyond,

genetic, double helix worn,

but I must own my own print whorl.


We all leave imprints of our line,

that palmistry of family tree,

though sometimes, oft, all fingers, thumbs.


Now weaker eminence, in crease,

skin leather, parchment, tenderised,

impregnated, what oils survive?


After Genetics by Sinead Morrissey

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Nigel Smith
Nigel Smith
May 26

Hmmm yep ya nailed it mate! I liked nature and nurture aspect that Bro Jarlath picked up on, and that led me to think of wider genetic coding in our make-up, as in Grandparents and beyond.

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You delivered as promised. Enough of the original imagery to pay respect but layered with a deeper tone.

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I enjoyed this - lots to like and ponder, the thing I was unsure of was the napalm references, can you enlighten me Stephen I am intrigued.

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Simply 2 more palm references: mother in the 'fragrance' industries, using 'palm olive' brand of soap, he as an American GI in Vietnam (slang 'Nam') where napalm, an incendiary mixture of a gelling agent and a volatile petrochemical - usually gasoline or diesel fuel - in effect a chemical flame thrower, that was used in warfare, often incinerating villages and Vietnamese. There is an infamous 1973 photo of a 9 year old girl running naked after being burnt with napalm - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phan_Thi_Kim_Phuc.

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Stephen, an intriguing read. Trying to pick apart the threads your words weave. Makes me mull over the nature v nurture conundrum.

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It was written in reaction to the published poem, 'Genetics', that Martin chose for Poetry Club last month.... I wanted 'a go' at the same subject...


Genetics


My father’s in my fingers, but my mother’s in my palms.

I lift them up and look at them with pleasure –

I know my parents made me by my hands.


They may have been repelled to separate lands,

to separate hemispheres, may sleep with other lovers,

but in me they touch where fingers link to palms.


With nothing left of their togetherness but friends

who quarry for their image by a river,

at least I know their marriage by my hands.


I shape a chapel where a steeple stands.

And when I…


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