Cinder Parkie
- Jon Best

- Jun 27
- 3 min read
Updated: Jun 29
Cinder Parkie
A traditional story
That’s part of its glory
Man once hale and hearty
He became Cinder Parkie
Into his happy life
Came such trouble and strife
No I don’t mean a wife
Parkie stress was rife
He shook and had tremor
Bradykinesia and more
Interrupts gait and constipation
Bladder urgent, frustration
A voice quiet today
Writing what does it say?
Poor balance and loss of posture
As time goes on there will be more
No longer steps but feet shuffle
Brain fogged and in a kerfuffle
Depression and anxiety
Are no strangers, won’t let him be
Then one day he awakes
Aching body close to break
In his room there is a stranger
She watches he feels no danger
Pharmacie Diagnose
Feels it in fingers and toes
She sees his symptoms and just knows
Knows his pain, he has no need to show
How can I help what can I do?
He misses the pub, beer or two
Pharmacie his fairy godmother
Medicates him, its no bother
She casts her spells with pills and potions
He has hope now as one of his notions
To find the right balance will take time
But everyday weakness falls, strength climbs
My magic cannot give you a cure
Relief from symptoms but no more
It will ache and it will progress
But one day a spell will find redress
That is no reason not to live
A man of talent with much to give
Take opportunity, take a chance
The pub is holding strictly dance
Surely that cannot be for me
My days of dancing long gone you see
Fully accessible she replied
Across the dance floor your feet will glide
To encourage participation
Raffle partners syncopation
A night for fun and glitter balls
But what if he has a fall
My spells and potions will protect
Until midnight your body they correct
But stay longer and they will turn off
Return of your symptoms will be rough
O pic a pone***she invites choice of horse ***pronounced Oh pick a pony
Turns into a chauffeur with a cap of course
Picking a box labelled as Madapar
Co-benelfopa magic word creates car
“Ippinix “ he stands straight shakes gone
“Rasagiline” he is dapper with suit on
Driven to the event in his stretch limo
He hears gossip, Is he a star? Who knows?
Out of the car he takes a chance
He eyes a beauty caught in a glance
She moved with grace of a princess
Hi I’m Vanessa just call me ness
The CinderParkie he had defined
His identity in his mind
She replied as he gsve his name
Its really nice to meet you James
Drawn together by circumstance
New partners but perfect match for dance
They danced as one across the floor
From the judges got the highest score
Overcome by joy and excitement
Time flew to future appointment
He found he was starting tremor and shake
Cramp grasped his left foot making it ache
As he felt the magic drain from his veins
Turned off stopped strutting, shuffled again
Aiming for speed but catching up to slow motion
He rushes through door almost tripped by emotion
His left shoe comes off, his foot cramps and claws
Toes curl with force and grab hold spasm without pause
He staggered into the undergrowth a ghost hidden
Camouflaged by foliage faded from sight unbidden
Ness looks around for her new companion
Surely he could not without goodbye be gone
What had happened what had gone wrong
She looked outside but he was seen by no-one
From the ground she gathered a clue
Surely no one would leave with one shoe
She checked with others, What was wrong?
No-one had seen him leave the throng,
Pharnacie sixth sense awarej not gone to plan
Looks through a window spies a horse but no man
One final duty she must ask, to track,
To locate and then bring James safely back
We move along through the next four weeks
Ness had no success but continues to seek
James tired and sad, thinks his future bleak
When least expected starts his winning streak.
Pharmacie read a poster seeking a dancer.
Straight away she kmew who should answer
Handed the poster to James and his eyes widened
She wanted to return shoe, and he was frightened
James rang Ness and although he did panic
Talked at high speed and his tone was manic
James explained he ran ashamed of Parkinson’s
He was so sorry it was nothing she had done.
We have reached the end without wedding glory
They became close friends, it is not a romance story
They danced every week partners stepped in time
Sharing smiles, synchronised and sublime




An interesting idea- could be the start of a parky fairy tale series Little Red Ropinerole, Pushing in Boots, Princess and The Parky, that kind of thing
A new fairy tale. Clever idea
Wow!
This poem is from a challenge I set myself on a recent Fathers Day to write something that a parent, grandparent could use to discuss Parkinsons with a younger family member