Water of Life
- Jon Best
- Sep 7, 2024
- 1 min read
Updated: Sep 20, 2024
Water of life
The pitter patter just a smatter
Morse code on the window pane
A message of the elemental
The drip drop of life fundamental
H20 hydrating human flow
As science ponders its might
A simple inorganic
Wave after wave energy manic
Vital driving weather cycle
Coastline sculpted and chiselled
Flood and storm event biblical
Forecast yet unpredictable
Ponder life elixir wonder
Eyes track a rivulets downward route
Resolve watered down at confluence
Await fair weather while deny influence
I too think the opening lines are superb...
Thank you Alison
I can hear you reading this in my head Jon, it's definitely got your stamp on it. I like the first two lines especially.