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MISSING PLEASE HELP ME FIND MY SUN


NAME: Summer

AGE: Young blooded

SIZE: Enormous

EYES: Sparkling

HAIR: Shining


OTHER

My sun and I, we are unity

in which I become what I should be

an optimistic fighter

an enthusiastic writer

a get up early morning

a never tired yawning

a splash and smell of sunscreen

flower fields and endless green

sand between my toes

birds singing early rising shows

humming butterflies and bees

dresses brushing sunburned knees

kids outdoors all day

ice cream cool hurray

candle dinner lights

hot and spicy nights

summer can’t be done

it only just begun!

help me please, to find my mate

I‘ll wait at dreamland’s gate


PLEASE CALL: +49 123 ME

RINA.SUN

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Love the descriptive and play on words.

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Alison Blevins
Alison Blevins
15 нояб. 2023 г.

Fabulous!

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Неизвестный пользователь
08 нояб. 2023 г.

hey guys this is really encouraging. after not really finding enough time to be here for far too long, three poetry dedicated and flattering comments on my piece. thank you to take the time to even read it. Martin and Stephen I will certainly and most thankfully use your words when someone is making jokes about my “German rhymes”…well to undust rusty expressions and standards is one main pilar in my poetry and not easy to do in a foreign language. So your words mean so much❤️

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Stephen Kingsnorth
Stephen Kingsnorth
07 нояб. 2023 г.

Your 'portrait' alone should attract attention.... the 'other' follow up confirms interesting prospects! I like it, especially unobtrusive rhyming.

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Неизвестный пользователь
07 нояб. 2023 г.

Great setup and punchy rhymes. Well done

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